Look on Purple Mash for the latest chapter of your story and follow-up activity.
Today you are going to finish your story. Continue from where you left yesterday. You need to include good punctuation and spelling. I am also looking for expanded noun phrases, adverbials and adverbial phrases. I am also expecting to see adventurous vocabulary to describe actions and feelings of the characters. Consider using a range of sentence types (exclamation, command, statement, question) to add interest for me - the reader. When you think you have finished, read back through your writing to check it all makes sense and your spelling and punctuation are as accurate as possible. Trying reading it out loud to someone, or to yourself in the mirror. This is a good strategy to use to find out if it makes sense.